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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA 
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Coursing rivers red Surging their given channels Thus is life's dear flow! Pounding out a beat Making sure it's ebb and flow seeks appointed rounds. Nature's rock and roll The music is life itself 'Til the Drummer quits. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've become very good at these, David! Wonderful job you've done here!  Denise |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~David~ Haiku should be your middle name, you are so talented! I reiterate what Denise has said Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wonderful haikus, I'm envious Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
What a wonderful way to describle river flow! like Dennis, your haiku always make my day  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent haikus David, and nice imagery within ... you are talented indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
David; Wonderful, It's true, You are becoming an expert at this. I truly love the simplicity of these lovely little gems. It's amazing how much they can say in so few words. Love, Sis Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
David, I believe the student is eclipsing his teacher! WELL DONE! Dennis :^) |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
These are really excellent, Deleeme!!! You are so good at Haiku! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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