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angelswing
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0 posted 2000-06-30 06:43 AM


Midnight sunshine .

I'll remember you at midnight,
When the moon is full,
I'll remember you at midnight,
When the sandman rules,
I'll remember you at midnight,
Underneath the stars,
I'll remember you at midnight,
Weather near or far,
What ever time of day it is,
I'll remember you,
You'll always be there by my side,
My one and only you .

Written by Tom Baker .


Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-06-30 06:57 AM


And I'll remember this poem!  Well done Tom,
sweetly romantic and very nicely penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

angelswing
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2 posted 2000-06-30 11:17 AM


Thankyou very much Kit for your kind words of encouragement . I appreciate your appreciation !!!
L.of.L. Tom .


Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-06-30 06:15 PM


I love this poem..very cool
I like the repetition
and the title is vey cool
great work
take care, jm

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The world calls a butterfly
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darkmagikwoman
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4 posted 2000-07-03 09:53 AM


tom, it is really good. A beautiful way to collective your thoughts. Poetry is definitely the way to go for you. Keep it going.

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5 posted 2000-07-03 09:57 AM


Tom~ very romantic, loved the title too! ***vote***   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



Enola
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6 posted 2000-07-03 10:04 AM


Hmm...I wonder who this is about!  Are you planning to show it to her (make sure you do it AFTER you've been out)?  And when is she going to get some of her stuff up here then?   This poem sounds rather odd coming from you, it's almost tranquil, but very nicely done mind.

The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look

SpitFire
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7 posted 2000-07-03 10:44 AM


~I love this.  The title is way cool. hehe....I call everything in my life that I love and that makes me happy "My Sunshine"...so sweet this poem. Great work. Take care. *Peace.
angelswing
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8 posted 2000-07-03 12:38 PM


Thanks everyone, I am very grateful of your support .
- Enola - Don't talk about the situation from now on on here as she may come on this site herself and Jo ( Darkmajikwoman ) is on here now aswell so be careful . Thankyou, the reason the poem sounds a bit different is that it's a totaly different style, which isn't quite so depressing as my usual and all my recent poems have been on the same theme, I'll put some of them up soon .
- Jo - WELCOME and thanks, you'll soon get used to the way it works and you'll be writing loads of new poetry in know time, I'll look out for it and enjoy reading it .
L.of.L. Tom .


Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

Mark Bohannan
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9 posted 2000-07-03 12:52 PM


Excellent poem.  I too love the title.  Hope you get a perfect tan from your "Midnight Sunshine"
kaile
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10 posted 2000-07-03 01:17 PM


ditto others' remarks
eye-catching title
interesting repetiton(w/o sounding clinched or trite)
you got my vote!

Sudhir Iyer
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11 posted 2000-07-03 05:20 PM


A sweet romantic poem from you, Tom... Very sentimental and very nicely done...

regards,
Sudhir

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12 posted 2000-07-03 10:11 PM


Very gorgeous and romantic work here!  

*Krista Knutson*

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Tennessee Angel
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13 posted 2000-07-04 12:26 PM


Oh I don't know how I missed this one earlier.  This is absolutely beautiful!  

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angelswing
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14 posted 2000-07-11 06:57 AM


Wow, so many kind words, i am moved and motivated by your on going reading of my poems as once you've read one you've pretty much read them all, Thanks I couln't carry on doing the things I do if it wasn't for friends like you . I am hoping to do some more poems on a different theme as I was getting bored of the old depresing style, I have just written some acrosstics so I may put those up .
L.of.L. Tom .


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