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Midnight Sunshine . |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Midnight sunshine . I'll remember you at midnight, When the moon is full, I'll remember you at midnight, When the sandman rules, I'll remember you at midnight, Underneath the stars, I'll remember you at midnight, Weather near or far, What ever time of day it is, I'll remember you, You'll always be there by my side, My one and only you . Written by Tom Baker . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
And I'll remember this poem! Well done Tom, sweetly romantic and very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thankyou very much Kit for your kind words of encouragement . I appreciate your appreciation !!! L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I love this poem..very cool I like the repetition and the title is vey cool great work take care, jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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darkmagikwoman New Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 2 |
tom, it is really good. A beautiful way to collective your thoughts. Poetry is definitely the way to go for you. Keep it going. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tom~ very romantic, loved the title too! ***vote***  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
Hmm...I wonder who this is about! Are you planning to show it to her (make sure you do it AFTER you've been out)? And when is she going to get some of her stuff up here then? This poem sounds rather odd coming from you, it's almost tranquil, but very nicely done mind. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I love this. The title is way cool. hehe....I call everything in my life that I love and that makes me happy "My Sunshine"...so sweet this poem. Great work. Take care. *Peace. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thanks everyone, I am very grateful of your support . - Enola - Don't talk about the situation from now on on here as she may come on this site herself and Jo ( Darkmajikwoman ) is on here now aswell so be careful . Thankyou, the reason the poem sounds a bit different is that it's a totaly different style, which isn't quite so depressing as my usual and all my recent poems have been on the same theme, I'll put some of them up soon . - Jo - WELCOME and thanks, you'll soon get used to the way it works and you'll be writing loads of new poetry in know time, I'll look out for it and enjoy reading it . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Excellent poem. I too love the title. Hope you get a perfect tan from your "Midnight Sunshine" |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ditto others' remarks eye-catching title interesting repetiton(w/o sounding clinched or trite) you got my vote! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A sweet romantic poem from you, Tom... Very sentimental and very nicely done... regards, Sudhir |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very gorgeous and romantic work here! *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh I don't know how I missed this one earlier. This is absolutely beautiful! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, so many kind words, i am moved and motivated by your on going reading of my poems as once you've read one you've pretty much read them all, Thanks I couln't carry on doing the things I do if it wasn't for friends like you . I am hoping to do some more poems on a different theme as I was getting bored of the old depresing style, I have just written some acrosstics so I may put those up . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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