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A breathe of you
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A breathe of you |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Bursting a breathe of air as I think of you, Winds carry your lovely aroma, As I breathe in deeper the times are reminded, The day we reunite will the day I shall breathe right, As the air enter my lungs it tickles my heart with your fondling memory, Goose bumps cover me from head to toe as the sumptuous air makes it way, Earlier memories are invoked once more longing for your sweet smell, This moment has sheltered itself in time, Holding no longer I exhale, A sense of loss is felt fleetingly, The instant has passed producing your absence, Your memories are stolen from me as the air scuttle its way through my veins, Feeling of weakness empowers thyself, To what I shall turn to salvage your icon, Only the breathing of the next breath shall heed my nerves. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Xeonox~ 'it tickles my heart' Good enough for me !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well you got my vote again. this is just another great piece from you. so do keep them coming my way please. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully written Xeonox! So many emotions tied into a single breath ... wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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