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If He Is My Star, Who Makes Up My Sky?
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If He Is My Star, Who Makes Up My Sky? |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 
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~*Little Star*~ by: Krissie S. Little star, Shining guiding light. I remember the way it used to be. You were the same that night, Spreading across my feet. As I floated down the way. Little star... Say you need me. I promise I'll make it right this time. As the blame lay upon me. I'll admit it was a little lie... I had to protect myself from you, Little star... Little star, In the broken sky. Did you wonder why I hid my face? I didn't have the stength to stand up to my lies. Please, have the courage to take me from this place. Oh, I need a chance, Little star. Please forgive the part, That I played in your fall. Cause it's gonna break my heart that I couldn't help you at all. Little star, It's getting hard to not forget. Oh, I swear I won't forget! The little things... Oh, my Little star, Please don't fade away... I miss you more than words can say. Each day, each day, I can't forget, The little things... That you gave to me. My Little star... *NOTE*-This poem wasn't really a poem to begin with. I heard a song called "Little Star" and got the tune stuck in my head. The only part of the song I could remember was the 'little star' part. Then I started thinking of love and lies and well.... the result is posted here. But this one really means a lot to me. And though I havent been in Passions very long I like what I see and wanted to share this with everyone. I hope you liked it! "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A beautifully written poem. I love it. Little things, little stars, little lies, makes me a little sad. I have the feeling someone is more than a little missed. Good Poem. Thanks for sharing it. I am new here also and have enjoyed it greatly. Welcome home. ps i posted a definition for acrostic in my "A Poets soul" for you. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Thanks so much, and yes they are missed, maybe more than a little. Welcome home to you too, and I saw your definition and I think I'll try to write an acrostic poem. Even though I'm not even sure if I'm spelling the word right! ~Kay "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, great poem, I enjoyed reading it, it has a lot of depth and meaning and the story it told was so true . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW...what wonderful writings. This piece was a wonderful read I enjoyed it very much  well doneTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Thanks so much Angelswing and Tracie66. "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Anikay* Thank you so much for sharing something so special to you, never fear...we will treat it with much kindness~ Beautifully written with feathery sentiments and longing. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AniKay~ Enjoyed the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Thanks!!!!!!!^_^ "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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