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Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2000-08-09 10:53 AM

Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening:
Thief’s Song

Though candle glitters in the window
And melts the frost around its flame,
I have no way of passing into
That room, and frozen finger cling to
The wooden frame.

My eager eyes soon lose their glow
A vicious dog... (Oh, I can weep!)
Sits, guards the safe, and thus I know
That I have miles and miles to go
Before I sleep.

Check out my poetry here:

http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-08-09 12:02 PM

Well, well, well......and just where have you been all this time? I see you still have a great hand for poetry. I really liked this one, cool rhyme scheme. Don't make yourself so scarce! Peace out.

*~Meredith~*

I want to publish scenes
And rage against machines
I want to pierce my tongue,
It doesn't hurt, it feels fine......
*Harvey Danger

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-08-09 12:16 PM

I really liked this, I could just picture it in my head

keep it up

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

3 posted 2000-08-09 12:30 PM

Another great poem Master....wonderful! Wanna read more...

Salooma

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

4 posted 2000-08-09 01:27 PM

Thank you all,

LyricFetish, it's good to be back...

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