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You are the one
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mystique Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 22 |
You are the one I remember the first day I saw you. You stood before me tall and strong. You smiled as I walked into the room. I couldn't breathe. When you spoke to me your voice was rich with warmth, and your words were kind and spoken gently. It was as if I was fragile enough to break. That evening you treated me respect, you made me feel good about myself. It was the first time I felt good about myself in a long time. You touched my hand and shivers raced down my spine. I felt so strange as if there were butterflies in my stomach. The first time we went out, I was so excited I had to remind myself to breathe. You took me for a ride on your motorcycle and I felt so free and alive. The rush was something I have never felt. Especially when you would touch me and look back at my face all flushed. You laughed and held me close I thought my heart was going to pound right out of my chest. It felt so natural being with you and being held i your arms. The more we saw of each other, the more I began to fall for you. YOU HURT me so badly when you turned away from me. I could not understand what went wrong. What did I do to make you do this? We had such good times together. I thought I had lost you for sure. It was a horrible first couple of weeks without you, but just when I had completely given up. You surprised me by telling me you missed me and wanted me back. I felt alive again, and it was wonderful. That first time I saw you again, I had the strongest urge to just have you hold me and never let go. I am thankful to feel that comfort again. The person I wrote this for knows who they are, they will read this someday, maybe. But my heart will always be his. mystique |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
mystique~~~just like a fairy tale ending...right when i thought it was gonna go bad it went back to good...whoever this person is must be really special...and i encourage you to give this poem to him to show him how you feel...keep up the good work... ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Wow, mystique! Very heart-felt! I'm glad everything worked out, and I agree with ERIN. Give him the poem and let him know how you feel. I look forward to reading more of your work!  stay cool  Lavada "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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mystique Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 22 |
Thank you very much. I know I should show this to him, but I can never get enough courage. mystique |
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