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Teen Poetry #3

Love is Magical

mystique
Junior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 22

0 posted 2000-08-08 09:48 AM

Love is Magical,
      if yours is true.
Never doubt it,
       It will tell the truth.
Treat yours with care,
       because in the end that is all you will have to live on.

Love is Magical

mystique

MoonPrincess
Junior Member

since 2000-07-17

Posts 29
Wisconsin, USA

1 posted 2000-08-08 05:26 PM

True, so true, that love is magical, and you will need it to live on... I like this a lot, and look forward to more of your work...
~MoonPrincess

"Love begins with a smile,
grows with a kiss,
and ends with a tear."

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

2 posted 2000-08-09 12:49 PM

Great post...seems like love is magical although I myself couldn't say. Sounds though that it's beautiful just as your words are in this simple poem...keep up the good work!

Salooma

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2000-08-09 02:14 PM

You kept it short, real and sweet. All the qualities needed to get a good point across, I enjoyed this one!

Love,
,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_.,

mystique
Junior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 22

4 posted 2000-08-09 03:08 PM

Yep short and simple seems to best sum it up.
Thanks!

mystique

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