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deleted poem --- I'm so sorry --- too personal, I didn't feel comfortable sharing it, again i'm sorry |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
[This message has been edited by acire (edited 08-08-2000).] |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow...this is beautiful and the old english makes it all the more passionate! you should really post this open...they'd love it! awesome though....very beautiful! keep em coming... Salooma |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Once again, it's beautiful! You are so talented! Your words come right out and made me feel the hurt for not only you but myself also. I can only tell you of how sorry I am about things not working out. I know you're hurting right now, and I know that no matter what she'll always be the first girl you ever loved or dared to express it to. I only wish there was something I could do to lessen the heart ache and mend the pain. But there's not. The only thing I can do is listen. I'm always willing to do that. I know it seems nearly impossible right now, but one of these days, you'll find another girl...another girl who can make all of your dreams come true. A girl who won't hurt you or treat you badly. I hope and pray for you that this girl will be everything you ever expected in a girlfriend. And if you don't find in with in the next few years...move your butt my way. hehe  Seriously though, keep your head up. One day the perfect girl will come around and be more than you ever needed. This I can tell you because-you and I share a special bond-we're both psychic!  OK so maybe I'm not psychic, but I do know that I am right, eventually things wil straighten out and your heart won't hurt so much any more. I know that too...from experience. You know I'm always here to talk and listen. Don't hesitate to e-mail me ir IM me. I'll be here for you! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear?~*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
sorry....something I left out.... < !signature-->~*~Time in it's own essence can heal even the deepest of wounds--including the heart. The bleeding will stop and the tears will no longer flow. Scars will remain...But with time, those too shall fade!~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear?~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 08-08-2000).] |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Don't be sorry! This was a very personal poem and I'm sure it was difficult to share also. Keep writing, and don't be sorry just because it was difficult. I'm very happy that you did post it. I wish that more people could have seen it...but I understand. Talk to ya soon! ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear?~*~ |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Grrr...you closed it a whole year before I got here. how inconsiderate. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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