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Drawing Blood
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Drawing Blood |
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The_Driven Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 60 |
On this darkest of nights, in a cold, damp, secluded basement... An abusive act takes place between "He", and his helpless victim. The victim, imprisoned in a dank box. Doomed, as he can do nothing but wait... Wait until his tormentor comes down to have his "fun" Its a very gruesome scene, as the victim cant even defend itself. It cant scream, or call for help. Its only fate now, to be "his" plaything, "his" tool, in a hideous, abusive game it doesnt even want to play. The victim is wrenched from its cell, its head bashed along the cold, white floor for countless minutes... Untill "he" decides what to do with it. "He" laughs as he begins to drag the poor bloodied soul. Blood is all over the place, staining the perfect white floor, filling the air with a sickeningly strong stench. After countless hours of punishment, "He" is finally done with his "fun". "He" puts his now battered "plaything" back in its dank, dark cell to wait. Wait until he is ready for it again. "He" looks down at what hes done; at the beautiful blood he's spilled. Precious blood, black as coal, yet shining in the glow from the overhead desk lamp. "He", the abuser, is ME. My victim is my ink pen. I write, and it bleeds intracite messages of expression, and fantasy along a cold, white sheet of copier paper. My victim, and i... We make beautiful poetry together. I think. |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
the poetry is beautiful. |
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Mel2Lizz Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 20Alamosa, Colorado |
So many of us feel this way and you were able to put it down in such a beautifl way...good job!!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I had to reply to this because it just put so many images in my head. I certainly wasn't expecting that for an ending  You did a great job of drawing in my attention and you never lost it. Keep up the great work. |
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The_Driven Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 60 |
I would like to thank you all for reading, and responding to my work. It was a pleasure reading your respones, and once again, i thank you all. |
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