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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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Okay... I know this is really cheesy, but it thought it would sound kewl before I actually wrote it....too late. Four Letter Words Love. Hate. Can't wait. Even when she's late. Look deep. Take heed. That soul isn't free. Keep that girl warm. Take time. Love will come. Jeremy D. Halstead 8-7-00 "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
Hey well there's something U don't see every day !!! I liked it...liked the poem but of course really liked the way U put it !!! It's a nice poem to read...great work !! -Robin- |
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Lurdburger Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 39Carlisle, Cumbria, England |
I love this, especially the layout! It's a good idea, keep it up! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
 Clever format Jeremy ... the title sure gets the attention! Well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This Life Full With Love From Your Eyes Fell Blue Haze From Your Lips Kiss Drew Kiss Ears Hear Soft Tune Love Song Hums Soul Glee Felt .... .... ....needless to say I enjoyed reading this one, Jeremy.... regards sudhir |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Jeremy- Wonderful idea, interesting to say the least and written by the pen of a true poet! Great job! Salooma |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Jeremy Great poem. I know your busy but keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
good poem buddy!!!you made it really creative...keep up the good work...when you get a chance IM me ok...i havent heard from you in awhile... ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
That poem was incredibly beautiful... Thanks for the pleasuer of reading such fine art. -jessica- |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Very creative and a very neat and different format. Keep up the work. Jeanna "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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thug-a-licious Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 27 |
This is a very unique poem. It's the type u don't see everyday. I think it's a GREAT poem and very creative at that ! Good job! Alexis |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
My dearest Jeremy! I'm so glad to see you still posting!! I missed ya! Anyways, this last week has been horrible. Call me when you can...please!! You know it doesn't matter what time...as long as you call. Anyways, I loved the poem...as is with all of your work. Keep writing my little hubby and I'll keep reading. Love YA! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear?~*~ |
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The_Driven Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 60 |
This is a unique poem. I enjoyed reading it. I feel as though it was very well done. Excellent job. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Very original. Its looks good and hopefully people can come up with more original stuff! Nice form and keep it up! ,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., |
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