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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Sonnet #2 I know not what this world has now become. Life too cruel and unkind to figure out. Days too short, but too long to overcome. Love too wounding and causes too much doubt. Hearts too full of hatred, greed, and desire. Pain too many times attained from life’s hate. Happiness too brief for man to admire. Sorrow too much in an unending state. So now dear world where do I sadly turn, When you have played with souls a ruthless game. Should let my injured heart stir and churn? Or will this wild foolish brain go insane? Call away the fate of concluding doom, And bring back one loving day to consume. [This message has been edited by Ron (06-25-2011 10:08 AM).] |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i never like to say 'i feel the same way' because i really dont know what other ppl really feel....but i felt the words... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
This was really well written and powerful. Can't wait to read more. ~Susie "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Very true and very well written. I enjoy your poems, keep up the good work. Your a good poet and dont doubt yourself! Love, ,.-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-., |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Very well written. I do hope to read more from you. Keep up the good work. Jeanna  "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
wow salooma this is really good...i dont think i read the first one but i am gonna go look for it now!!! ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful sonnet, my friend, dispite of the sad subject. I hope writing this helped your sadness some. Just remember: "To the world you may be one person, but to one person, you may be the world". "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
This needs more recognition. People need to respond to this more! Its awesome. Love, ,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Nikolette - Thanks for the great reply...means a lot to me Angel - Thanks so much...I hope to write more and post as well, you guys are encouraging. J - Thanks for your reply. You're the sweetest! Isabelle - Much thanks...I enjoy your writing as well and def wanna see more of ya around here! ERIN - Thanks so much babe...I hope you liked the other one too. LoveBug - Thanks for the encouragment, wish I'd find that one person Much thanks to everybody for their replies!! Salooma |
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