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My Tears Flow |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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My tears flow When I see your smile My tears flow When Im in denial My tears flow When Im thinking of you My tears flow When I dont know what to do My tears flow When my heart's on empty My tears flow When I wish you kissed me My tears flow Now that we're not together My tears flow When I try to remember Goes out to Katie from TX. I miss you babe. ,._-=-^~* Jeremy *~^-=-_., |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
This is super sweet and sad too. I don't know why but I think guys who cry are awesome because it proves that they can be sensitive instead of stupid and macho all the time. Good work....Tara |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
I agree with Tara on the guys crying thing, and this is a really great poem too. Keep your head up, and keep up the great writing. Kittie |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wowieee.....sweet! definatly agree with the gals....guys who cry over things like this are the greatest. they care! good luck with Katie....hope it works out for you! salooma |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
good poem...i like your style!!! i wish you the best of luck with katie... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
HEY! I loved this poem...and yep im agreeing with the rest of the girls..guys who cry are soo attractive because they are sensitive. Where have you been all my life? ;-) just kidding..keep writing i really love reading your work. ~!*DancinQueen*!~< !signature--> "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 08-03-2000).] |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
[This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 08-03-2000).] |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Jeremy- that was incredibly sweet. I agree with everyone, a guy who can cry over a girl is so sweet. Keep your chin up, and good luck with the girl Bel |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Absolutely beautiful. And this has to be the sweetest expression of love I've ever heard. You rock! *~Meredith~* If I were the sun, You would be in shadow And if I had a gun, There'd be no tomorrow *BNL |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
Hi! I feelin you on this note Hun! Keep it up |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
that was very sad, but yet so true, I understand the feeling, I feel it right now... *SweetPoet17* |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Jeremy, Great poem. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Thx, wish other girls would see that. I appreciate all the responses! ,._=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-., |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
I have got to say this is the sweetest poem i've read in awhile. You did a very good job at expressing your feelings for this girl. Good work i loved it. Keep it up. Jeanna  "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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lupigirl Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 19Mequon, Wisconsin |
I WISH I WAS KATIE!!!  Keep up the awesome work, Jeremy! I love it!! |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Katie is a very lucky girl to have you I hope you know that.That was a great peom kep up the good work! Lauren |
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GodsPerfktAngel Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 28Ohio |
Okay I will change my name to Katie If you write me some poems? hehehe j/k any ways good writing and keep it up!!!!  |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Just want to know what everone thinks. Bumpin it up, sorry! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
loved this....bump*...any more replies? Salooma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is so cool, highly enjoyable! |
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