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You’ll always be my friend
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You’ll always be my friend |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
You’ll always be my friend By Jessica DeMaio The need for one another goes beyond life but into the heavenly skies… A moment, a glare, a gentle touch, a stare… Passion grows within us… Dreams begin… Wishes fall… I look into your eyes of a thousand words… I touch your hand… I whisper… I want you to understand… Time between us… Is growing each day… The feelings stay… Your part of my life in an amazing way… Eyes shut… Lips depart… Hands let go… But as long as were alive… No matter where… The feelings will never die… Because we once cared… Cared enough to love… Cared enough to say… One day… We will care enough to let go… But not forever… Because we both know… In our hearts… In our minds… Love has no time to end… Because you’ll always be my friend… |
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Stotty Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 29 |
What an excellent poem! I really enjoyed reading this. I read it a few times actually. I just wish i could write like this that's all! Keep it up! Michelle. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem is so true about a relationship and love and it really applies to my life.Keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Great poem...really liked the small structure of each sentence and the way it all melted together. Thanks for sharing it! Salooma |
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