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Teen Poetry #3

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jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

0 posted 2000-08-05 03:30 AM

When I think, I think of you
When I awake, I awake with you
When I talk, I talk about you
When I cry, I cry with you
When I die, I die with you
When I smile, I smile about you
When I whisper, I whisper about you,

Everything I do is about you

,.-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-.,

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

1 posted 2000-08-05 08:26 AM

I realy like this poem. I like you did a great job and keep up the great work and i hope to read more.
Lovely_Kris

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

2 posted 2000-08-05 10:35 PM

I really like this poem and it reminds me about my best friend.. We do everything together.. And we talk about eachother all the time... All of it!!! And i have had it happen with a guy too..hehe But great poem i loved it thanks..
Love ya,
cutie

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

3 posted 2000-08-05 10:41 PM

Another great post...keep em coming Jeremy, but the thing that kinda worries me is that all that is coming from pain....pain of not having her. Send me an email if you ever wanna talk, [email protected] and take care.

Salma

SweetPoet17
Member

since 2000-08-04

Posts 108

4 posted 2000-08-05 10:49 PM

I thank you for that poem, For it touched my soul... And it touched my heart... Thank You
-Jessica-

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