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the beast |
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NaTaLy Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43brooklyn,ny,usa |
i dream of looking into those devilish eyes standing over her as she pleads helplessly but i have no mercy she never knew what was coming one minute laughing with her friends the next lying in a pool of despair blackness all around her waiting and it gets quiet and the beast goes limp and i, chuckle to myself and walk away. nat<~~~~funny girl |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wish i could say i understood this, but i appreciate creativity...thanks for sharing! salooma |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
wow......that is kinda scary even though i don't really understand it either. it was definitely creative. good work.....Tara |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Wow...i totally didn't understand this. But i love your creativity. I'm gonna read it about 100 more times and maybe i'll get it by then =) keep up the great work* ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow!  I don't exactly understand it, but it has alotta emotion. Nice work. Keep writingBel What exactly did this one mean? |
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NaTaLy Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43brooklyn,ny,usa |
one word,bully. you figure out the rest ;p nat<~~~~funny girl |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
This was a great poem keep up the great work I love your poem. Lauren |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
sounds like ya got in a fight with someone at school or somethin like that but nice...btw this is Kyle aka Huck |
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