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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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I wish I knew what you were thinking about I wish I knew if you had some doubt I wish I said that I liked you before I wish I said my true feelings more I wish we'd met earlier because we're not so close I wish we'd met again because I miss you the most I wish that you'd talk to me because Im sad I wish that you'd talk because the silence makes me mad I wish that you were here so we could reminisce I wish that you could come to me and give me a kiss ,.-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-., |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Jeremy~ I loved your peam it was so awsome keep up the gret work I hope to read more of your poems! Lauren |
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GodsPerfktAngel Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 28Ohio |
suhweet poem.I am thinking about giving that to someone!!! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Jeremy...great poem, but don't you think that you should share these with her? That's the only way she'll understand where you're coming from. They are absoulutly beautiful and maybe she'll see how much you care about her. Especially "My Tears Flow"....that one is a killer, I'd be weeping from here to Mississippi! Good luck with all, but I hope Katie knows how you feel. Salooma |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
I feel that poem completely... It is the state I am in right now. -jessica- |
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