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lupigirl Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 19Mequon, Wisconsin |
Hey guys... I know this one is really short and simple, but my friend Andre really likes it a lot... God is in the small things, and I was inspired one night in the park after I realized I'm such a dork because I get really excited over things like fireflies... nevermind, my mind is wandering. Let me know your thoughts! LOVE YA ALL!!  Fireflies Blink in the night sky Bringing new hope to the darkness A promise of day Their beam so small and seemingly insignificant Yet they add a new presence and a new beauty to the blackness and shadows Making my world shine brighter with they joy of little things A penny found, a raindrop, a smile... Thank you, God, for the small things Thank you, God, for the fireflies |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
LOL This was really cute..nice that you can write poems about the simpliest things~! Keep writing =) ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I like that poem it's really cute keep up the good work! Lauren |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I think this is a nice poem.Keep up the gret work. Lovely_Kris |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is just lovely Lupigirl! Beautiful sentiments, what a lovely read! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a cute poem and to tell you the truth your title attracted me cause it was different. Hope to read more of this simple beauty and keep wwriting! Salooma |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
That was very cute, and showed alot of meaning... I am thankful for the little things, a simple act of kindness can make my day brighter. -jessica- |
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