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Finding Myself |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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*Finding Myself* People tell me im beautiful, but why can't I see it. All i see is this plain skronny girl, destroying herself bit by bit. I want to love myself, but it's just so hard to do. I wish I could look in the mirror, and say "I love you." Instead, I look in the mirror, and discover every single flaw. But one day, I looked and this is what I saw. A beautiful girl with long blonde hair, that falls just right on her shoulders. The prettiest smile, with dimples the size of boulders. Her eyes so bright, the perfect shade of blue. I can finally look in the mirror, and say "I love you." "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
That poem was so awsome because it's exactly like how I used to think.I still cant love myself but I just stopped caring. Lauren |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
ToGunLauren~ Thank you for replying..BUT you should NEVER stop caring about yourself because its so much easier to live once you love yourself. Because no one else can love you until you love yourself =) So dont give up!! "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
WHOOPS! SORRY [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
hey great poem its truly awesome...ya said ya liked mine so look under Kyle aka Huck thats me too i just got tired of that name so im usin this one now from now on and again great poem =oÞ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
DQ~~~good poem...its weird how people look at themselves...you know what i mean...i wrote a poem called AN UN~PERFECT PICTURE if you want to read it...its something like this...keep up the good work... ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
great poem....i'm glad you can look in the mirror and see who you truely are. great post...about the thing many girls these days face! salooma |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
great poem....i'm glad you can look in the mirror and see who you truely are. great post...about the thing many girls these days face! salooma |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
great poem im glad you are able to feel good about yourself its one the most important things to be able to do in life Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
WOW* LOL I hadn't checked the forum for awhile. LAst time i checked i had 3 replys on this. THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH! Cause i was kinda bummed that no one replied. But thanks a ton!! Meant alot.. "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
We are our own worst critic. I'm glad the you have finally accepted your own beauty. I would like to know the cause of it though? Keep writing and be proud of yourself As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
acire~ Well nothing really triggered it. I was just so tired of not liking how I looked. So i just sat in front of the mirror and named all the things i would never want to cahnge about it. It worked! Thanks for replying!! ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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lupigirl Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 19Mequon, Wisconsin |
It is so awesome that you are finally able to love yourself... I hate that struggle and I'm really going through it now. Thank you for the encouragement that I CAN get through this. Your poem is truely the greatest peice of truth available...  SMILE AND KEEP WRITING!! |
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