Teen Poetry #3 |
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Somewill Will Always Love You (And That Someone Is Me) |
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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN Junior Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 20 |
Someone Will Always Love You (And That Someone Is Me) I know that life changes, as things come and go Time rearranges, and people do grow But whatever you do, and wherever you'll be Remember someone will always love you... (and that someone is me) Your smile is the sunshine that forever lights my way And I'll never forget the first words that swept my heart away So don't ever feel that you and I have lost touch, That could never happen because I love you so much We both already know it wasn't meant to be But remember someone will always love you... (and that someone is me) All beautiful things in this world can't compare To the laughter, the smiles, and the love that we shared And even though it all has faded into the past, The commitment to our friendship forever will last From the first moment that magic had taken its start, Forever and always, you've been number one in my heart I'll always be with you, and I hope you can see That someone will always love you... (and that someone is me) |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Again, wonderful poem and great job! The rhyme works really great and you've definitely got real talent. Kittie |
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lupigirl Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 19Mequon, Wisconsin |
I know exactly what you're feeling here! Thank you so much for sharing this with us! You have a real talent. I can really relate with this poem... THANK YOU!! Smile! ![]() |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
This poem is just as awsome as the rest of the one's I've read of yours.Keep up the great work! Lauren |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
That poem was great, I wish I was still friends with my past ex, the one I lost my virginity to. Its awfully hard, but I guess were not meant to be as anything, well anyways that poem was sweet and wonderful. ![]() -jessica- |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
I like your poetry a lot. You're very good. This world would be a lot nicer place if everyone had somebody who cared the way you care for this guy. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Very good poem, very sweet. keep it up Bel |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Beauitful heartfelt poem you've got here. Really sentimental! Salooma |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
i love your work so much!! i will have to read all of them!! all of your poems that i have read so far i can relate to totally...love is the greatest feeling...but heartbreak is the worst feeling you can imagine. (i know that's my signature but i wrote it anyways!! keep up the great work!! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
OMG!!! I feel like my poems don't even deserve to be on the same website as yours. All your writings have such strong emotions that jump out to the readers. Your talent is so extraordinary I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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