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In One Final Breath
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In One Final Breath |
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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN Junior Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 20 |
Angel in the Darkness Although you cannot see me, I'm watching over you just the same And although you cannot hear me, I'm there, calling out your name Although you cannot feel me, I'm holding your hand ever so tight And although you just don't know it, I'm always on time to say goodnight And when your tears of anguish Whisper down your golden skin I'm praying that you feel my love Comfort you from deep within And even from a thousand miles, You're never far from my heart Because you've reached a place inside my soul That could never break apart But even when your time comes, And you don't make it up here with me I'd follow you down to the burning fires Just to be with you eternally. ~I love you D, with all my heart and soul~ |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a lovely poem, gave me goosebumps as I was reading it. Made me realize as well tat even when you feel all alone, you nesver are. Once again, excellent poem, keep it up  Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
oh WoW! I REALLY liked this...one of my favorites now! It was beautiful. Keep writing!! I love your work ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I don't know why I never got the chance to read your other poems. Now, I see that it s defenitely my loss. Words cannot explain how much I love your poems, they just hit you straight at the heart down to the soul. Please do share more of your poems...I'll be waiting to read em' I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow!!!This was beautiful!!!I am amazed...You have talent...I hope to see more!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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