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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN
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since 2000-08-04
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0 posted 2000-08-04 02:16 AM


I Appreciate You


When I was lonely, you always knew the right words to day
When I was crying, you were always there to wipe the tears away
When things went wrong, you always seemed to make them alright
And I appreciate you for everything you brought into my life
You are my angel, that guided me when I went astray
You are my hero, because you never turned around and walked way
You are brightest star, shining through the darkest of nights
And I appreciate you for everything you brought into my life
When I was hurting, you were always there to help me carry on
When I was aching, it was your smile that made me be strong
When I was slipping, you were there to hold me so tight
And I appreciate you for everything you brought into my life
You are the touch that comforts, when my heart is so weak
You are the voice that sings to me, when there's no words to speak
You are the power that lifts me, when I think I can't fight
And I appreciate you for everything you brought into my life.


~Dedicated 2 Krayzee D...baby, you are my heart & soul & so much more.  I love you more than heaven'z stars~


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SweetPoet17
Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108

1 posted 2000-08-04 02:27 AM


Beautiful poem truly... I am happy you have found love hopefully I will someday... good metaphors... and similies...
*SweetPoet*

Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
2 posted 2000-08-04 11:44 AM


Great poem. I loved it very much.  Keep up the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

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