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I'm Over It
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I'm Over It |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
Hey all I'm back from a long vacation and I had alot of time to write. Hope you like I'm Over It Now you wanna pay attention to every word I say Now you wanna act as if I'm begging you to stay Before you never understood where I was coming from Before you never realized what we've become After I always wondered where we would stand After I always wondered why you never held my hand Now you wanna accuse me of never caring anyway Now you wanna say it's my fault that you have gone astray Before you never seemed to notice all the damage you've done Before you never made me feel like I was number one After I always figured my heart was in demand After I always figured you would never understand Sadly but surely I soon would forget Sadly but surely I'm definately over it |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Wounderful poem . I think you did a great job and keep it up. I'll hope to read more of your poems. Lovely_Kris |
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MeLScHneD Junior Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 11 |
Ooh I can SOO relate to that! This poem is REALLY good!...but ya know what? If that poem is about real life...then you made the RIGHT choice! B/c some people just aren't worth all that pain and suffering....but you realize it after its happened, and your dream of them to be yours is already true...so its hard to let go...eventhough you should let go! Okay, its late, and I'm starting to talk jibberish..hehe...keep writin!!! *<3~MeL ScHneD~<3* |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Hey good for you frget that guy he was all about him he's a selfish uncaring a** but great poem keep it up :0 |
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