Teen Poetry #3 |
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Dreaming of You |
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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN Junior Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 20 |
Dreaming of You Sometimes when it's late at night, I look up at the sky with stars shining bright In the back of my mind, I imagine you are Somewhere far away, looking at the same star I then close my eyes and to God I pray I ask Him to make sure that you're doing okay I hope that you're happy, with a smile on your face And whatever you're doing, I pray that you're safe Cuz even if we cannot be together, I want the best for you, now and forever And if at any moment, you are feeling pain Remember I'm here for you through sunshine and rain There is not a single moment that passes me by When I am not thinking of you and longing deep inside But whatever you do, and wherever you go It would make me so happy as long as you'd know That no matter how much we've both grown apart You'll always have a special place deep in my heart And I long for the day when you come around, When I can hold you close, as heaven shines down But even if that day never arrives, I'll keep dreaming of you, and keep the memories alive |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Impressive flow skills, I think you’re a natural. This all seems very pure and from the heart, none of it forced in the least. True subjective beauty at its best! Great work and welcome to passions from the Darkside. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions! This had a beautiful flow .. such sweet and tender thoughts of friendship ... nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you have the most amazing talent. everytime you put words together, they end up melting my heart, pls keep writing As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was awesome!! I really liked that. Keep writing! Luv, Sweetstuff ~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~ |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This was a BEA-UUUUUUU-TIFUL poem! Keep up the great work! ![]() |
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