Its not time for you to go..

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Teen Poetry #3

Its not time for you to go..

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

0 posted 2000-08-03 06:38 PM

I have a best friend I love so much
Shes sweet, kind and one who brings me life
When shes sad it makes me mad
when shes happy my whold turns around

Her parents and mine are totally different
Hers make her mad and some times sad
Mine tend to make me smile but make me cry every once in a while
We both tend to say things we wish we hadden't
Well, I know i have
When I get mad I hate the world, everything, and everyone in it but her
I wish to end life and die as one
I look back a day or two after and say I'm glad my wish hadden't come true!
My family may make me mad, or friends may piss me off from time to time
But if my wish were to come true
I'd loose the thing that means the world to me!
My best friend.

I say this now cuz I just heard her say it!
Her parents made her mad, so she thinks she has to end it.
I love her so much so please god don't let her do it.
Don't let her think shes not worth it.
If she goes I shall too and that messes up too peoples dreams, instead of just one.
I love her, I hope she does relize it, I will be here for her, for as long as she is here for me!!!
I love you..

I wrote this poem just off the top of my head like everyother poem i have done.. But I had just gotten off the phone, and like the poem said, she said she could end her life.. I know she probably wasn't serious.. I have said it thousand times myself! But I love her, I don't want her life to end but for hers not to end, I can't end mine.. I don't want my life to end, so for me not to end mine she can't end hers!!!!! Thanks..

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

1 posted 2000-08-03 07:51 PM

Wow~ This is really good. And i'm sorry to hear about your friend. But don't let her give up on life. Someone i know, not really a friend committed suicide on the last day of school this year..and all it would have toook was one phone call from one person to change his mind. Don't give up on her and give her some extra TLC for awhile! She'll need it. Keep writing!!

~!*DancinQueen*!~

"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

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