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Teen Poetry #3

My True Feelings

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

0 posted 2000-08-02 11:24 PM

When we were together we had fun
But that was then and now its done

Now that I talk to you I miss you
And I cant decide what to do

My real emotions have come out
And you felt a certain sense of doubt

Now you want to be a close friend
And let our emotions turn to an end

Well only see each other twice a year
But you don't realize how much I care

For now Ill try to be by your side
But when we meet I wont abide

Cause I love you way too much to let go
But for now I wont let you know

My true feelings

,._-=-^~* Jeremy *~^-=-_.,

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-03 12:05 PM

great post jeremy....the rhyme is unique and the emotion speaks through. keep sharing cause you've got wonderful talent!

salooma

Misty Blue
Junior Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 44

2 posted 2000-08-03 08:08 PM

How you doing?
Well, I was writing to give you praise for this very true poem. You probably don't really know me cause i've been gone for a while but I'm back and ready to write and read. Stay Tru and keep it up

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