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Squirter
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 17
Minnesota

0 posted 2000-08-03 02:37 PM


I love to be with you
Thank-you for all you do
You're never crabby, always sweet
You're always there, making sure I eat.
If only you could see
What you do to me
The way my heart pounds
Every time you're around
I love when you hold me tight
You make eveything all right.
Right now I'd like to say
You help me in evey way!

Thank-you baby, I love you!



© Copyright 2000 Nicole - All Rights Reserved
DancinQueen
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
1 posted 2000-08-03 02:52 PM


This was really good..sounds like the person this is about is very special to you! Keep writing..love your work

~!*DancinQueen*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
2 posted 2000-08-03 09:19 PM


Hey Squirter - Now this is terrific!!! Sounds like you have a special someone in your life, and this is a nice way to show them how much they mean.  Bonnie
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