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That Girl |
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slim_shady New Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 1Roseville, California, Untied States |
I can feel her beauty when I'm not around, I am isolated by something that irratates me. She's so soft and gentle, pretty as a blooming rose on a cold morning. I desire her as much I desire life itself. She throws her temptations at me, I want her so bad. She's beautiful in every way, flawless in another. I know my desire for her means nothing in her heart. And I will take you in my arms and hold you right where you belong, till' the day my life is through...this I promise you...this I promise you..... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Slim_Shady!  Beautiful thoughts for your opening post! I hope you enjoy your stay here! Check your e-mail for a special message Best wishes, /Kit McCallum |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! I really enjoyed your first post. I hope you like it here as much as I do. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
hey welcome to passions! great post...loved the simplicity yet truth spoken in each word. hope to read more of your stuff! Salooma |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
Nice first post. Hope to see more from you soon. Tara |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Sweet and sad-some people are like that I guess. Great poem and first post. Keep writing Bel |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
She's beautiful in every way flawless in another ~ I loved this part But it can't be true. If her heart is so hard that even desire as strong as yours can not fet through then she is flawed. Welcome to passions look forward to more posts IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Welcome to passions!! I hope you like it here, and feel you can share anything.. That was a good poem!! Hope to hear more.. Love ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
welcome! I realy hope you enjoy it here. I think you did a great job and i'm looking forward to reading more of your poems. Lovely_Kris |
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