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MeLScHneD Junior Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 11 |
*~*Maybe...*~* I promised to never do it again I told myself, "Boys aren't worth it" I said they'd always just be a friend But "you and I" together always fit I don't know how this started Somewhere between the first look and the last kiss I said it was good that we parted But now its you that I miss I don't know if I should say yes or no I don't want another broken heart that I have to mend Or worse...I don't want your heart to sink low All because I said it should end It seems weird how it goes off and on One day, I love you The next, that love is gone I never know what to do Your smile makes me melt Your hug makes me weak Your kiss is the best thing I've ever felt And I love to hear you speak I hope that you still take me Even after a little wait You and I were meant to be Because I think this is fait After all this time I hope you'd let me guess That you'll be mine Because my answer is yes *sorry this is kinda bad...but I think this person knows who they are! I love you!* |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
This isn't bad at all! I really liked it. And I can sooo relate to it! KEep up the good work..and good luck with him =) I'm sure he'll come back to you ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that wasn't bad, it was great!  Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
That definetly wasn't bad. I hope whoever you wrote this for reads it. Very good poem. Good luck with them keep writing Bel |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
This was a really sweet poem! I liked it a lot, and been though it too!!! Just remember that there will always be little, and big tests in relationships, just to see if you can make it through, some times you don't and sometimes you do... It looks like you two failed the first couple, but are working it out to love again... Good job.. Love ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This is very sweet and things are going to work out. Tours words are to pure not to. IsGona |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Very well thought out. Makes me wonder If a girl I once was with would take me back. It was really sweet and direct, go with your feelings and do what you think is good for your heart and mind. Good Luck hun. ,.-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
I really felt this poem, Stay Tru and keep it up. |
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