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Colors Of Me
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Colors Of Me |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA 
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Colors Of Me Part of me is pale blue Peaceful and serene Quiet and nonchallant Afraid to speak up But on the other side I am vibrant yellow Brilliant and vivacious Loud and outgoing Not afraid to do anything As unbelievable as this may seem these two tones are both me ~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
great concept that you've put into this poem! i never really thought of personality colorwise and that is something to think about. thanks for sharing it! salooma |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Great poem. very nice imagery. A lot of people have two sides to them. Some have more. |
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Squirter Junior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 17Minnesota |
Hey! Great poem! It's simple, yet it explains SO much! I think everybody has those two sides...and some many others! Keep up the great writing! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I agree with squiter. Short poem, but at the same time it's straight to the point. Excellent idea here sweetstuff101. keep writing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Sweetstuff~I give you 2 thumbs up...This poem was so unique...I really like it... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey Sweetstuff: Very cool poem you have here! Really good desciption and vocabulary! Keep up the great work! ~***~ Lotsa Love, Angel (^_^) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is very creative, I like that  "Part of me is pale blue Peaceful and serene" "But on the other side I am vibrant yellow Brilliant and vivacious" Great job writing this one sweetstuff! |
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