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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Metaphorical Fakes: Sounds of music. Drip water life. Dark shades of paint. Large death knife. Various religions. Conformist society. Gastly goverment. Faded, old tree. Ticking clocks. Wasted time. Innocence gone. Sour Lime. Glory banners. Blues parade. Dancing clowns. Green eggs laid. Heart of fear. Soul not true. Movements fake. The phony you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~ Here is a link that will take you to learn more about the haiku's...There is another link on that page that will explain it all to you... www.netpoets.com/pip/Forum40/HTML/000041.html < !signature--> ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 10-02-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
thanks erin much appreciated. Remind to never post up a poem about metaphorical fakes hahaha, nobody replies to it. I find it funny though, oh well! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this is GREAT! and so true... that is the sad part... its a great enlightenment ~*Justine*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I just don't know what to say about this one Dopey, I like it  |
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