Teen Poetry #3 |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair ![]() |
I only met her for a couple of days And I cant describe the feelings that came my way What do I do when a girl lives so far? And I can't reach out to her like a star Do I visit or do I forget? Theres no way I can ever regret The times we spent and the laughs we share Now I miss you too much to bare Tell me why, please give me a reason What do I do now that it's a new season? I want you to know how I feel about you truely But its all too complicated and I don't want to disturb thee I just cant seem to grip all these feelings And now Im confronted with all these dealings I'll take advice or anything you have to give As long as it makes this hurt Im feeling no longer live Im way too far to go back to what it used to be So I have to share these words to all that can see Im only a plane away but it seems so hard To relive the feelings that we once jared Now I have to say good bye until we meet again And hope that your as sweet as when I met you then These words don't begin to describe what I feel But for now It's good until we become real |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, great poem. I really enjoyed it. Everything happens for a reason and I am sure that everything will work out just fine. Just keep your head up. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
didnt you post this one already but with a different title??? cuz i could swear that i already read it... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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