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Un-noticed |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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~Un-noticed~ I'm always in the shadows remaining unoticed by your eyes what I wouldn't give to be seen by you just once For you would see, that dim sparkle in my eyes it ignites when I'm in your presence but it's quickly put-out when I see that i'm just a nobody... an un-noticed nobody in your eyes **This really doesnt have a pattern, just some words i scribbled down one day.. "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
whoever this person is that makes you feel like this isnt worth your time...they should make you feel good about yourself... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
no it was about someone i liked but they didnt even know who i was "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Good poem, but you aren't just nobody. What else can I say-guys be like that. Keep writing Bel |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
very nice poem queen. Don't worry too much about getting noticed by him. He'll figure it out soon enough. |
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mystique Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 22 |
Don't ever feel that you are a nobody. Don't be scared to have them notice. Make your presence known. mystique |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Great work, definitely something people can relate to. Don't feel like nobody, you're always somebody special. Kittie |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
short but sweet You know sometimes, the girl also has to do something to be noticed. Girls can't just expect to stand in a corner and be noticed by the person they like. It doesn't work that way. Sometimes, wheter you're shy or not, you have to initiate at least a conversation. Girls think that dating is easy for guys, it's hard too you know, just getting up the nerve to ask someone out is not easy. Who knows he probably does notice but he's too shy to show it. Hope this makes sense  |
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