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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
As the song starts she gets up to dance, She is the mistress of this spicy Brazillian rythm. While everybody else, those who just danced the salsa and the merengue, seem incapacitated by it, She was born for this rythm. Her beautiful flesh quivers in this fast paced dance. That slender body of hers, the way she moves, she steals my heart. When I get up to join her, A prison braclet stings me. It's you. A reminder of of who we are, and what we have. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. Keep up the good work. Good luck with this girl. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
this is a great poem....i love the details in the first too stanzas, but let me get this straight. you can't dance with the samba girl cause you're involved with someone else? and it seems like you care a lot for her...right? great poem anyways! Salooma |
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Le Capitan de L'Amour Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 60 |
wow this is a nice poem Jose. Oh-la-la. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
thanks to the three of you for reading (at least someone read my poem) ~Salooma: that's right, although we don't go out anymore. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow that was good. All of your poems are good...you have a lot of talent. I'm sure other people read your poems, they just might not reply. Keep it up Bel |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
Wow....I loved the way you described everything so well. Your poem was awesome...Tara |
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