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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
~Um, well... this poem will be a little "angry", but writing has always been my way of letting out anger. So, please keep that in mind when reading this, thanx~ Nails screeching down a chalkboard, lightening spitting from my eyes; it is you I am angry at, you whom I despise. You scream and yell about things- I really don't give a damn, you rant and race at how I am different when you don't even know who I am! You think those tears will bring me back time and time again, not now, after all this pain, and after you traded me- claiming me as your best friend. How could you possibly think that I would never leave? Is it in your head now, or do you still not believe? I'm gone, got it?, don't think again about me, I'm no longer a problem in your life, you should feel relieved! But do you, of course not, cry baby!; those burdens are a bit heavier not that you don't have me. After all you used me for, did you honestly think I'd stay?, get the picture now that I'm gone because I will not stay another day. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
WOW~! Great poem. It's good that you get your anger out through poetry. I have many "angry" poems as well. So i know how you feel. Keep up the great work! ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
kittie~~~they say the best way to get rid of anger is by letting it out...well you did a really good job letting it out in a poem...i give you props for this poem...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there I know the feeling. I hope everything gets better. Keep your head up. This was a great poem. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Very expressive. You did a really good job at not cursing. Because I couldn't post an angry poem because it wouldn't make sense after it was edited. Keep it up. Jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow Kittie, some powerful writing here! I always find it helps to write things out when frustrated or angry. I hope things work out!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
there's a lot of anger in this one. Sorry to see what you're going thru with your friend. he/she might deserve a second chance though. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Great poem. And I am glad that you have found the courage to stand up to this friend. It's hard to lose a friend but it's even harder to deal w/ ones who don't care. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ |
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