Teen Poetry #3 |
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as a flower blosssoms... (short and sweet) |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
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As a flower blossoms with beauty Humanity blossoms with joy and love As a flower must face the winter sun Humanity must face truth and life |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is utter perfection! Bravo! Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Wonderful! ![]() Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~People R supposed 2 B luved, and things R supposed 2 B used; most of our problems stem from realiTy: Things R luved and People R used~ |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
thank u both you are very sweet and sweetstuff, who wrote that quote? Sad but true. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
just like you said isgona short and sweet... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So much said so wisely, in so few words ... this is lovely Isgona! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
One verse and such a beautiful one... IsGona, This is absolutely great... regards, sudhir |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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littleC Junior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 21 |
Absolutly beautifull!!! Enjoying to read, and how true! littleC ![]() |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful and rings with truth too. Excellent! ![]() *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
beautiful indeed! i loved this piece....such a great concept. salooma |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you all. Your comments are most appreciated. ![]() IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
magnificent!!! speechless!!! bravo!!! As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you for your kind words |
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