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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
I never realized how hard it was going to be to let go of you. Here I sit on this plane, listening to Sarah McLachlan, crying. We've been apart for over two months and still I cry over you. I miss you. I miss being loved unconditionally. I miss being kissed and feeling those sparks fly. I hate feeling like this. I don't want to miss you anymore. I just want to forget. I want it to be over. But I want to feel loved again. And I want sparks to fly when I'm kissed. I want to be happy again. I don't want to be with you, but you are the only one who's given me that. I'm scared I'm never going to feel that again. That no one will love me again. That no one will want me. That you were the only one who could ever feel that way about me. I just wish it was over. |
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FairyPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25 |
That was a really great poem. It showed lots of emotion. If you keep looking im sure you will find someone who will love you just as much as this other person did. keep up the good work. Jess |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
very good. I think this was a great poem. Keep up the great work and i hope things work out for you. I hope to read more. Lovely_Kris [This message has been edited by Lovely_Kris (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i am sorry that you feel this way...i wish you the best of luck in the future...eventually you will find someone that is like this only alot better... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, this poem seems to be very emotional. I can only hope that things get better, and believe whne I say you will that special somone. Just keep your head up. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I know where you're coming from, and I'm very sorry you're having to go through it. I hope you will find the right person who will love you unconditionally. And until you do, remember that your ex 'Mr. Wonderful' didn't deserve you. Be happy! (or fake it convincingly) *~Meredith~* If I were the sun, You would be in shadow And if I had a gun, There'd be no tomorrow |
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