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My Angel
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My Angel |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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*My Angel* The way you touch my soul, is unexplainable. There are no words to say, for why you make me feel this way. We're soul sisters I swear, we're God's dynamic pair. I know i couldn't live without you, i would never pull thro. I would die for you, and give-up everything, too. I'll never let you down, i'll be at your side as fast as traveling sound. We're going to grow old together, we'll always be best friends forever. So this is my promise to you, I love you sooo much, and i hope you do, too! *Written for my bestfriend Nicole. <3 ya girlie!! =) |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
very touching poem. It's kind of hard to believe that you're new at this. I hope that you enjoy posting here. what are you doing awake at this hour? |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Thank you for responding! Jose~ Well im technically not new at this. I've been writing poems for awhile. But i had always kept them to myself in my journal. thanks for the comments! |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
thanks for responding to my poem at this hour. It's too bad you've been keepimg your poems to yourself, they're very good. maybe we should chat sometime. |
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FoxyGirl Junior Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 17 |
Hey, that was a great poem. You too must care about eachother alot. thats good. Keep up the great work. cant wait to read more. Jenn |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
great poem its really wonderful to have such a great friend keep up the good writing |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
welcome to passions!!! i really enjoyed your poem...i have a friend who sounds just like yours...hummmm....can this be the same person...nah...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
thank you all!! its nice to have support from everyone. im glad you all like my poem! looking forward to reading all of your work =) |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
imagine what a really good friend could do to someone. In this case, it's inspired you to write something great. keep it up. sorry it took me a while to read your poems As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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