Mrs. Madness in the middle

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Teen Poetry #3

Mrs. Madness in the middle

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-07-28 03:12 PM

personally..not much makes me horrified
and privately.. im eating away at me
   (b e g i n n i n g  to  s e e)
wish y o u could be here to  s i t  at  T h e
t a b l e and s w a l l o w  me  whole
I'd  f i l l  up  your honesty
with  my    m i s e r y
of   the     M i n u T e
t a s t e  m y love, my hate  M y S o u l
a situation u
             n like any other
and whats to do cant stop feeling sorry
f o r everyone w h o's  y o u
theres a  s p i r a l  between my mind
o n the far side of   g o o d times
i try to yell from a self made hell
               a r e
                you
             t h e r e..?
    mrs. m a d n e s s in the  M i d d l e
      ( s h o u l d h a v e k n o w n)

Y o u  w o u l d  k n o w  so very
                l i t t le....

mr0001
Junior Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 39

1 posted 2000-07-28 08:42 PM

this is an incredible piece!!! i love the way you wrote it, forcing the reader to REALLY read the poem...excellent job

"crazy" is just who you are...amplified.

some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color.

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

2 posted 2000-07-29 02:15 PM

Wow, this poem is incredible.
It's been a long time since I've read something this good. I would vote for you four times if I could.
this is just incredably good!!
Exelent!!!!!

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