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Teen Poetry #3

Peach

Gregory
Junior Member

since 2000-07-25

Posts 22
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States

0 posted 2000-07-28 09:02 AM

"Peach"

A peach is a fruit so soft and sweet,
With one single bite, your heart is complete

With its beautiful skin and tenderness to the touch,
This fruit explains why I love you so much

The sweetness of the fruit puts a smile on my face,
The sweetness of you comes from a special place

The place is my heart where you can always go,
These feelings I have, I will always show

You are my morning sunshine, my bright and happy days,
With you by my side, I will treat you in many ways,

With love, kindness, respect, and glee,
I want to be a part of you and you a part of me

Together we can strive and always want to reach,
Because you are my life... my ripe Georgia "Peach"

Gregory

Broken_Heart
Member

since 2000-07-24

Posts 57
Netherlands

1 posted 2000-07-28 10:02 AM

Touching this poem is indeed... Ah yes, how I remember the feeling of being in love... Nice work, hope to see more of it!
Sincerely Broken_Heart

Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within...

FoxyGirl
Junior Member

since 2000-07-28

Posts 17

2 posted 2000-07-28 12:16 PM

Great poem. Very descriptive and touching. It is a terrific poem and keep up the great work.
Jenn

FairyPrincess
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 25

3 posted 2000-07-28 12:32 PM

That was a really great poem. I hope to read more of your work.

*Jess*

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