Teen Poetry #3 |
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'Memory' (Dedication to my recently passed uncle) |
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Gregory Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 22Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States |
This is a poem I wrote to my Uncle who passed on September 26,1999! RIP ![]() Memory Sometimes I wonder what went wrong, One day you're here and now you're gone I remember the good times when I was happy and glad, But now with you out of my life, I'm terribly sad You've left a loving family and handsome son behind, I can only tell you the thoughts that run through my mind I'm often depressed and feeling 'blue', The words that I write are painful but true Going through life without a loving uncle who's there, It's like an unprotected child, who's cold and scared If I could go back to every moment we shared, I'd bottle it up because I deeply care Knowing that you're gone, I wonder a bit, Acknowledging death maybe near, I look forward to it Knowing that you'll be there with wide and opened arms, to guide and protect me from danger and harm Although I wasn't there that morning in the cemetery, I want you to know, you'll always be a 'Memory' ![]() Gregory |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i am really sorry to hear about your uncle...ill keep you in my prayers...you wrote a really good poem...i give you props for this one...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Gregory, I'm so sorry for your loss. This is a beautifully written tribute to one you held so dear. Best wishes, and take care, /Kit |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I am sorry to hear about your loss. Keep your head up. This was a nice way to express how you feel. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
what a wounderful poem but it was sad poem. Hope you keep but the great work. Lovely_Kris |
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FairyPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25 |
That was an excellent poem. Keep your head up and dont forget the memories you have of your uncle. I look forward to reading more of your poems. *Jess* |
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FoxyGirl Junior Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 17 |
Hey gregory. That was a really great poem. Sorry to hear about your uncle.Keep up the great work. Jenn |
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Gregory Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 22Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States |
Thank You all for replying to my poem! It really shows that you care! Thanx |
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