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Rose Petal
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Rose Petal |
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Gregory Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 22Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States |
"Rose Petal" Love is a seed that with you and me, Can make something more magical your eyes have ever seen Your smile can be the sunlight.. so full and bright, Its morning sunshine and daily light Our love can be the soil..that keeps it in place, What we've been blessed with, is an amazing grace Your voice can be the music..that plays in its mind, The sound that's soft, gentle and always kind Our trust and guidance.. can raise it safe, Because in my heart, you're in a special place Finally in the end, our love will receive a medal, With our hearts and lips, as soft as a "Rose Petal"  Gregory |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
wow this was great!!! amazing!! I see by your profile you're a CREED fan too..... great taste my friend |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a beautiful poem...keep up the good work my friend... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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FairyPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25 |
I love that poem. its really sweet, keep up the good work. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
WOW! that was amazing! i absolutely loved it! keep it up!  Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~< !signature--> ~People R supposed 2 B luved, and things R supposed 2 B used; most of our problems stem from realiTy: Things R luved and People R used~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 07-28-2000).] |
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