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I Wanna Be With You
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I Wanna Be With You |
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Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
Someone may have already wrote a poem like this...and yeah, Mandy Moore sang a song that was called this. But I've been at the beach, and I've also been longing for my girlfriend, Bristol. I really didn't have too much of a good time since Bristol wasn't with me. I just feel so sad. But um, I'm writing a poem about wanting to be with her. Here goes. "I Wanna Be With You" From the depths of my soul It's beyond my control It's been too long I don't know what to do All I know is that I wanna be with you It's been such a long time Not seeing eachother is a big crime You wanna see me too If I ever asked you to marry me I hope you say I do I just wanna be with you Time is putting us apart I hope this isn't close to the end Hopefully not a start I love you too much Being with you and such I really love you I don't love anyone else I don't know who But all I know is that I wanna be with you Damn girl I miss you I have no clue what to do I can't stand to see other couples I just wanna be with you Whether it be tomorrow or tonight I just want you to be in my arms And hold you tight If you only knew I wanna be with you< !signature--> -- "True love lasts forever." "Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die." [This message has been edited by Alex Sankowich (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
i don't know if you meant to do this or not but *from the depths of my soul it's beyond my control* is from the 98 degrees song!! i thought the poem was lovely i just noticed that!! very wonderful poem!! i hope Bristol likes it!! It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all. |
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Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
Umm...well, it is from 98ยบ's "I Do (Cherish You)"....BUT, like I said once, I get my inspiration from music, and if I have one or two lines to go by, I can just hit it off from there with my poem. < !signature--> -- "True love lasts forever." "Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die." [This message has been edited by Alex Sankowich (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Alex! Your longing and yearning comes through loud and clear ... nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit P.S. It was a little difficult to read with the small white print Alex ... you might want to experiment a bit to make it easier for the readers  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
you are making me go blind...lol seriously you need to change the color...and like kit said make the print bigger...but anyways this is a good poem...i wish you the best of luck with this girl...she must really be special... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Alex, once again great poem. I think you should share this with her. She sounds like a lucky girl to have someone like you to care about her so much. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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