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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
id like to apologize first for the double replies iv left a few times i dont know why that has happened, my computer is really crappy and slow and keeps messing up and i think that has something to do with it ill try to figure it out so sorry about that on with the poem you really think you know me but you dont at all just use me for your amusement well good, have a ball laugh at me and think i care yea right, i thrive on it as if id be pathetic as you like my soul gave in and quit the way yours did one day just stopped living on its own throwing away all personality and giving up the thrown a voiceless mouth in a crowd thats all you are a petty life void of anything meaningful your existance is just a scar you think im the sad one but i have a life, a soul your just a never was a loser with a heart of coal i wrote this about all these people that are the exact same and only care about what their "friends" think of them i can tell they make fun of me behind my back but i honestly dont care im proud to be different if that means im myself im a cross between a nerd (good grades), a jock, and a punk (i like alternative, heavy music plus i dress like a punk and have piercings and such |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
you sound like a very nice person!! i agree with you that you should just be who you are and not what everyone else wants you to be!! great poem!! it has a really good message!! It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well sherm i am a cross between a book worm and a bad girl...i love to read but yet i love to party and get all screwed up...and what people say about me...i can honestly care less...now at least that is...keep up the good work...i am enjoying reading your poems...< !signature--> ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
Hey Sherm.. I loved this poem...I share the same view, but sometimes it's better to have a heart of coal than to be hurt..I think people who are 'sheep' as I call people who follow others, are suffering from insecurity, just like the whole crapped up world. Everyone's existance is a scar... You sound very interesting, i'm a cross between everything  mostly i'm a meek leetal mouse "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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