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Le Capitan de L'Amour Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 60 |
Old Reaper of the unknown dont take my soul, because you already took my life by taking by taking my sweet darling away from me, tell your evil god to have mercy on my poor soul, since without love there is no point of existence, no passion, no pain, tell him to talk to the god of heaven to take my poor defeated soul when its time for my suffering to be over, for I got to live long enough to learn the mysteries of life and then I will finally learn the ones from death. |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
once again this poem would be perfect for dark passions #2!! i love your work though!! i will have to read more of it!! It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
Nice poem...leaves you thinking with the power of it...Welcome to Passions, and keep posting  "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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