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Invisible Pain |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
no one knows me or how much it hurts how bad my pain can be they just dont see i have this invisible pain in my life like a stain throws me into a depressive state fills me with grief and hate the past is a broken bone and makes me feel all alone the fun times are no more gone before i came ashore no one knows me or how much it hurts how bad my pain can be they just dont see all the fun times i never had the lonely memories that make me sad the invisible past of a no one filled with the pain of someone no pictures of friends and me no fun memories to flip through and see just a wasted seventeen years darkness to the eyes and silence to the ears no one knows me or how much it hurts how bad my pain can be they just dont see this is about me moving around a lot and never living in one place for more than a few years so then when i finally make friends i hear about all their fun times and see their pictures, things i dont really have, and everything that used to be fun that i want to experience is something they have done a million times and are bored of |
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Heather Renee New Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 4Bowling Green, Kentucky |
~hey...I just want to congratulate you on this wonderful poem. It has so much pain and meaning in it. I can tell it came straight from the heart. congrats...keep writing!! You have a great talent! =0)~ *god bless* ~Everyone can master grief, but she that has it. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed your emotions so well in this lovely verse Sherm! I'm so sorry for the pain you feel in this. I had never thought of how difficult this must be on young people to move around so often, but I can now see this in your words. Beautiful writing Sherm. If there's one consolation I can offer, it is that as long as you have a computer when you move ... you'll find that you'll never lose the group of friends you build here at Passions ... they'll travel right along with you.  Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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