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Teen Poetry #3

Love with a vision

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-07-24 04:07 PM

I had a wonderful dream yesterday
Resting on your lap and looking at stars
You teaching me all those fanciful galaxies
It was silent night away from everyone
Just you and me together as one
I remember saying we'll be together forever
In other's eyes all we do is improper
But without your love I'm a pauper
Then we hug and kiss each other
Everything is so simple and real
I'll give my life for this moment
When I can hold you tenderly in my arms
Make love to you in every possible way
Then we stand naked under moonlight
Thinking whether its right time or not
Passion raging in me and you
An uncontrollable need to satisy the lust growing
Then we put on our clothes
We sleep toghether with a vision
A vision of togetherness forever
Realising love is not just lust
Its commitment to be together forever
The dream ends then I'm awake with a new life

Sincerely
A_L

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-07-25 08:40 AM

Beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Martini
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-07-25 03:04 PM

wow
this was really good!!!

great work

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-07-26 02:11 AM

A_L~~~ what can i possible say...this is a really good poem...this one is my all time favorite by you...i give you props for this poem...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2000-07-27 09:28 AM

A revitalising dream, I concur...

Amazon_Lover...
nice fluent poetry... enjoyed this one..

regards,
sudhir

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-12-16 10:23 AM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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