Teen Poetry #3 |
Love with a vision |
amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
I had a wonderful dream yesterday Resting on your lap and looking at stars You teaching me all those fanciful galaxies It was silent night away from everyone Just you and me together as one I remember saying we'll be together forever In other's eyes all we do is improper But without your love I'm a pauper Then we hug and kiss each other Everything is so simple and real I'll give my life for this moment When I can hold you tenderly in my arms Make love to you in every possible way Then we stand naked under moonlight Thinking whether its right time or not Passion raging in me and you An uncontrollable need to satisy the lust growing Then we put on our clothes We sleep toghether with a vision A vision of togetherness forever Realising love is not just lust Its commitment to be together forever The dream ends then I'm awake with a new life Sincerely A_L |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Beautiful poem. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
wow this was really good!!! great work "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
A_L~~~ what can i possible say...this is a really good poem...this one is my all time favorite by you...i give you props for this poem...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A revitalising dream, I concur... Amazon_Lover... nice fluent poetry... enjoyed this one.. regards, sudhir |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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