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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
On the day I was set free, I went searching for you. You who had called my name You who had expressed your desire, called to me. I wanted to rush into rush into your arms, to feel your warmth, and I could not. I found myself entangled, and chained down, hopelessly I watched you cry, as you realized that you couldn't hold me in your embrace We reached for eachother but my chains held fast to my mortal limbs. I was finally set free, so I went in search of you… and you to my amazment… Gone. Absoulutly, without a trace as if you had been a ghost, that desolved into tears, and was never seen again. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Such sorrow...but written extremely well. Keep up the great work!  *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Very emotional poem. I am sure that I am the last person you want to hear from. Just keep your head up. I liked the poem, though, keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
Excellent, full of grief...and pain.. "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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