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Fairy Princess
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since 2000-07-19
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Fitchburg Ma, USA

0 posted 2000-07-20 11:35 AM


The boy in my dreams doesn't know I'm alive,
He's the only one that I'll ever date,
He seems so nice and sweet and everything,
I won't ever hurt him, I won't ever ignore him
How can I get him to notice me? I guess I won't
Oh no he's started likeing me and I'm liking him
We fianlly go out a smile apears on my face,
The next day at school I see him and I'm shy around him.
All I want is to go home and never be seen with him again,
But here we go again I ask him back out,
He said YES I'm in love
He's on my mind 24/7
Now my hearts filled with love again,
He's awesome too he's all I eber wanted
I'm fianlly complete by his love
I don't want this "love" to end
If it does end one day and we are never together again,
I Want him to remember I'll always love him.
But Then I wonder will he love me back?
             ~*~Minna~*~



((Peace out))
~*~Fairy Princess~*~

© Copyright 2000 Minna - All Rights Reserved
BabyGirl1
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since 2000-07-02
Posts 91
Morris, IL
1 posted 2000-07-21 11:56 PM


Good poem.  Begining a new love is always akward at first, but then once that is over, the feeling is wonderful.  It is always hard to think if things were to be different if he would still love you too.  Keep up the great work.

"We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."

-Luciano de Crescenzo-

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
2 posted 2000-07-22 01:59 PM


Minna~this poem is WONDERFUL!! your words describe your thoughts so well. I hope that everything works out for you two!! and just remember that some of the greatest loves come from the most awkward beginnings. Keep it up mu friend. Love Always~*~PryncessJess~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-07-22 02:07 PM


well this is a good poem...but just dont say that he is the only guy you will ever love...he may be your first love...but he probably wont be your only love...you know what i mean...the first guy i feel in love with...well i dont even consider him a friend to me anymore...he broke my heart so bad...but i have found someone new...who has glued my broken heart back together...< !signature-->

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~


[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 07-22-2000).]

Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 2000-07-23 08:40 AM


Love is such a scary and akward thing...
I think it's usually the wierdest, strangest feeling ever. Love is usually misconstrued to be true, when it's usually infatuation, or affection, but it sounds as if you're happy. So go for it. And don't worry about future emotions, they will eventually come along.
Jenn

Lovely_Kris
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

5 posted 2000-07-24 12:55 PM


Great poem I realy like this poem. I liked the way you expressed your feelings. I hope things go well with you.

Lovely_Kris

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2007-12-03 08:26 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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