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another riddle |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
It is darkness In the most literal way It can change a person In just one day It can happen In just one instant Or it can become Over many a days, doubled and bent It can leave With the touch of a hand Can be warded off By the powers of a man It changes the world For those who know it It is a world changing event For those who get it It can make people stronger In an abstract way It is painful and cruel But people survive day to day For those who it attacks In the middle of their life It is horrifying thing to face And to overcome it means strife For me it is Only a momentary thing It will go away soon It will be just a “fling” But for some it is more For some it is their life And from my little experience I can identify their strife What is it? always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
well, as before, jus email me for the awnser, and since the story behind it is kinda what ive been doin thats kept me from writing it, AND the story will give it away, than email me for the story too SORRY FOR THE INCONVIENCE but i really dont wanna spoil this one, i wanna see waht everyone will awnser to this cuz i think its a hard one and again thanks everyone CLB |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
This one is a really hard one i can't not figure it out... sorry i don't have a good guess, but is it like hate or something...??!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
at the top of my mind i have one guess to what it is...but this riddle is kinda hard...my guess is a brokenheart... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
well, my guess is as good as anybody's right about now. If I have to have an answer I would say the same thing as erin...a broken heart...? I'll be e-mailing you soon...ok NOW! hehe. nicely done though! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, I am not too sure about my answer, but I think that I shouldn't say anything yet. Maybe I will leave with a guess or two...brokenheart like erin and jess said. I doubt I am right, but one never knows. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
That was a very good poem. Well written. I'll look forward to reading more of your work. Keep writing and have fun. Love ya Danielle  "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Poem was a true work of deep emotion I hope all comes out well in the end hope to read more of you work |
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Rachel8383 Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44 |
Great job, i'd have to guess with the others, a brokenheart. keep it up, it was great! *Rach* |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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