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It would of been my loss
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It would of been my loss |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
There is something upon your lips I feel you want to say And when you said that "I Love You" All my pain drifted away I felt those words you said to me , you meant with heart and soul And now I know! You I'll never let go |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
Nice poem. You have a lot of emotions flowing through you, don't you? You're doing great. I hope to read more of your work. "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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smoothie New Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 4 |
Kirill, you are a really meaningful person in my life, and this peom is really touching, keep up the good work bro!!! |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
truely heartfelt poem good job! |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
short but sweet...very good poem...and you're lucky to have felt that feeling! Keep writing and good luck. Love ya Danielle  "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. A lot of emotion. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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heartbroken New Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 9 |
I really like this poem. All your poems are great. They have really deep things in them. I cant really relate to them cuz i have never been in love. There is something i would like to tell this guy i like alot but im too shy, maybe i will some day. Keep up the good work!  ) |
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Rachel8383 Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44 |
great job, i know the feeling! keep it up, *Rach* |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
wow!!! i like this...i know that feeling all to well... i feel the same way about my boyfriend...keep up the good work...ill keep reading... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Gregory Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 22Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States |
Great job TrueLUV..That poem was nice..keep writing and good luck! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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